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Thursday, 05 January 2006

A Dissection

I am gaudy on the table
A map of gutted stars
Tattered torn moth eaten heart
Bitten apple lips and a core of worms.

This is how I open up.

Tangled vine splitting hair
Strung up with barbed wire.
Strewn through with broken glass
Shattered crystal ball hands.

This is how I offer up.

I choke on ink and starved time
A baby faced betrayal burning in my eyes
As I spit up heavy dirty words
Fat stone heavy tongue.

This is how I conjure up.

Bones sifting dust and
Clattering a hollow rhythm
As I dance unstrung
Melting greased wax flesh.

Constance|2006
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Great poem , where you from? Oh, and thanks:)
- 1/8/2006 12:00 AM
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I'm in Ohio. You?
- 1/8/2006 10:01 AM
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this is an amazing work ...
- 1/13/2006 11:46 PM
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Righteous.
- 1/29/2006 3:36 AM
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